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Updated I need your imput on a rough draft I’m working on

February 22, 2007

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Click on it to see a bigger more readable size. Let me know what you think. Any thing I’m missing, got wrong, is it to much, could there be more?

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286Comments2007-02-22+18%3A16%3A29Ben to “**Updated** I need your imput on a rough draft I’m working on”

Chris Marsden says:
February 24, 2007 at 10:10 pm

Is it meant to be a logo, a poster, etc???

Only initial comment would be the text at the top almost bleeds off, otherwise very nice.

Any other comments would be effected by what your intenetions are.

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james says:
March 4, 2007 at 3:46 pm

looks good, i agree with the bleed issue…. and maybe the outward text gradient doesn’t help it stand out much…maybe more emphasis like drop shadow or ????? love the blog….

james wright simonsolutions.com

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Ben says:
March 5, 2007 at 3:19 pm

Thanks for the comments. I appreciate your help with this. I will work in the top white wording and also the word Outward. My goal with the gradient in Outward is movement, but maybe that can be achieved another way.

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